Bravo!
Excellently done. This was really funny, and in my opinion comparable to Legendary Frog's work.
The art quality (good, but not brilliant) might keep this off the front page, which is unfortunate. The NG masses would enjoy this.
A note about the style: I liked it, you captured the characters in a simple, humorous element well. If you drew this in a typical 'internet furry art' way I would have absolutely hated this.
Good work, and make more because they will look better.